Not sure of the title, but I like the lost friends that they have become at the end. That is so real. And I liked seeing elephants in the sky whenever you look up.
Roger ~ Thank you so much for dropping by and leaving that lovely comment. Much appreciated.
Douglas ~ Thanks. The title is very important and meaningful to me as the piece is one of several I have written in memory of my friend Matt. He was at one time in a band called "What Four Skulls."
Pauline ~ Thank you. Kind of you to take the time to read and comment.
Simply brilliant. I laughed, I cried, I saw elephants. Thank you, Roger
ReplyDeleteNot sure of the title, but I like the lost friends that they have become at the end. That is so real. And I liked seeing elephants in the sky whenever you look up.
ReplyDeleteFab, Sara.
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This is great, Sara.
ReplyDeleteLoved the description of their youthful happiness.
great last line.
Thanks,
Pauline
Roger ~ Thank you so much for dropping by and leaving that lovely comment. Much appreciated.
ReplyDeleteDouglas ~ Thanks. The title is very important and meaningful to me as the piece is one of several I have written in memory of my friend Matt. He was at one time in a band called "What Four Skulls."
Pauline ~ Thank you. Kind of you to take the time to read and comment.
I can see why that would be meaningful to you Sara.
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