Sunday, November 23, 2008

The Collector of Shiny

I have a tiny story up at Every Day Fiction, it's called The Collector of Shiny, and is a rare attempt at a love story. It is customary on that site for people to vote/rate the stories, and perhaps leave a comment too, so if anyone feels so inclined that would be appreciated.

6 comments:

Nik Perring said...

Cool story - I enjoyed that!

Nik

ariellegodslioness said...

Very Raymond Carver"ish" ("inclined toward brevity and intensity").

I enjoyed its calm manic quality; to reach a point that even the hedge needs to go is an attempt to match the emotional intensity of the situation.

The roots go deep between these two people as well :)

25/11/08 14:31

Unknown said...

Nik - cheers, I really appreciate you commenting.


angelictenderbutton (nice name!) Thank you so much. I'm really very chuffed now!

Hurrah!

Group 8 said...

Hi S, I left a comment over at EveryDay. Nice one!
WRW x

Unknown said...

Thank you WRW, much appreciated.

pierre l said...

It was a great story. Well done.

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